Monday, 4 November 2013

Critical Reflection - The Essay Process (Edited)

I feel that I have made gradual improvements as I proceed through this course. The course had improved my academic writing to a large extent in terms of grammar.

Writing the problem-solution essay was no easy feat as I am more aware of my mistakes and hence, have learnt to be more careful during the writing process. In the past, my essays often consisted of mainly grammar mistakes and through this course, I realised that it was due to the common use of ‘Singlish’. For instance, the use of ‘would’ is often abused by Singaporeans during writing and I am guilty of such errors.

I believe that this course had amended some of my habitual mistakes and raised the standards of my academic writings in the university. However, there is a need to improve on my vocabulary as I face difficulty in expressing myself and often find repetition in the use of words.


My next phase of learning will consist of reading more academic journals in order to improve my vocabulary and sentence structure.

Sunday, 3 November 2013

Final Problem-Solution Essay

The Impact of Globalisation on Singapore's Culture

By Joan Tan

Over the last century, the world has enjoyed the convenience globalisation has provided in terms of transportation, communication and tremendous economic growth through trade. Despite the numerous benefits that globalisation has brought, there are some drawbacks to this worldwide phenomenon. One of which is the loss of localized culture and this causes cities to become increasingly similar to one another. Also, economic growth is of more importance as compared to culture and heritage and the loss of such culture is, unfortunately, permanent.

However, it is fortunate that governments have begun to realise the need to preserve the culture and heritage of a nation and to build a national identity with such local culture. For instance, in Singapore, national education has been introduced in the curriculums of the youths studying in primary and secondary schools. The increase in the efforts towards conservation and preservation of monuments and cultural districts has also successfully slowed down the erosion of culture in Singapore. The report will be evaluating the efforts by government institutions on the preservation of culture and heritage in Singapore and suggest alternatives to improve the situation.

First and foremost, the preservation of culture is necessary as such national education exists to fulfil the purpose of educating Singaporeans to embrace their own culture and hence, create a national identity. Some features of national education include learning how to appreciate the peace Singapore enjoys from racial harmony and the uniqueness of the various cultures and how they have evolved to become part of the Singapore culture. Educating youth on their history and the nation’s sufferings in order to achieve the economic growth and standards of living Singaporeans enjoy today helps build a national identity as it reflects something common amongst all citizens. It creates a sense of belonging and allows Singaporeans to feel attached to their homeland (Ministry of Education, 2013). However, national education has its limits and this is especially so for “global citizens”. As globalization has promoted the free movement of people and goods, we often find that one is never a “pure” Singaporean. The mix of various nationalities makes it difficult to enforce national education. In fact, it is nearly impossible to create a national identity amongst such global citizens with their vast background differences.

Therefore, instead of focusing on enforcing propaganda on children today, national education should be focusing on allowing children to enjoy the freedom of speech and to encourage them to play their part as Singaporeans in terms of environmental conservation, providing platforms for them to participate in the local political scene and to encourage active community engagement. By encouraging the young to participate actively in nation building, they may feel inclined to remain and help the country prosper due to the obligation to protect the country they have helped shape. Although there may be downsides to this proposal, it certainly helps in creating the identity Singapore urgently needs, an identity where citizens are all engaged in deciding the future of their country. It is more important to look forward and create an identity that cannot be erased simply by the fact that global citizens have not been through the era of “suffering”. Educating the young on the past is simply not enough.

Furthermore, the government is actively seeking to preserve national monuments for cultural and heritage purposes. According to the National Heritage Board (2013), the preservation of monuments and significant sites in Singapore has been on-going since 1971 when the Preservation of Monuments Board was set up. The board has since been merged with the National Heritage Board and is responsible for researching possible preservation sites and to provide the support to maintain and restore such sites. They are also responsible for creating awareness amongst the public and act as an advisor to businesses and the government.

Despite the urgent need for the preservation of national sites, there have been numerous occasions where such sites have conflicting interests with the modern economy. For example, Bukit Brown, which was featured on the “World Monument Watch 2014” has become the newest victim of the land transportation development in Singapore. Part of the Bukit Brown cemetery will be converted to roads that will help improve the congestion during peak hours (Urban Redevelopment Authority, 2012). Land scarcity in Singapore has resulted in the inevitable loss of cultural and heritage sites due to the need to cater to the rising population and growth of Singapore’s economy.

Therefore, there is a need to strike a balance between the use of land for urban development and the preservation efforts of cultural sites. One way that could provide the balance is to promote restoration rather than preservation. Restoration may seem to be a cure rather than a preventive measure. However, cultural and heritage sites that were forced to give way to urban development could incorporate elements of buildings or monuments that were once part of the area. Developers could be made to install certain facilities such as museums in the present office buildings or even work with the exterior of the buildings to preserve the elements of culture and heritage. For example, developers could retain traditional Chinese rooftop designs on newly developed skyscrapers in Chinatown to give an idea that the heritage site used to be located in that particular area.

In conclusion, the loss of culture caused by globalisation has resulted in a lack of sense of belonging among young Singaporeans. However, present efforts such as national education and the preservation of cultural sites and monuments are insufficient to prevent the rapid loss of local culture. Therefore, there is an urgent need to cultivate an emotional attachment among the youth in Singapore and the most efficient way would be to allow them to participate in the country's policy making process and to actively encourage environmental conservation and community engagement. The inevitable loss of national sites due to land scarcity should be reinforced by restoration rather than simply preserving rundown and old buildings which serves little purposes. By adopting such methods, the pressing need to integrate global citizens and to create a unique culture can be alleviated.

References
Ministry of Education. (2013). National Education. Retrieved from   http://www.ne.edu.sg/
National Heritage Board. (2013). About Preservation of Sites & Monuments. Retrieved from       
http://goo.gl/CsuhPO
Urban Redevelopment Authority (2012). News Releases. Retrieved from       http://www.ura.gov.sg/pr/text/2012/pr12-26.html